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The Death of an Artist by ~ADreamReflected:iconADreamReflected:



White squares form

             a box

to lock us in the cages of

tedium,

chaining up

our

minds.

                        Pens and calculators become

                instruments of torture,

       with computers that brood like

smug

         executioners over

a valley of lost Souls.

                            You call it a Career;

                                  we call it Genocide.

There is no evidence,

no

bloody knives

or

smoking guns.

                             There is nothing but

                             tight-lipped mouths
                    
                                      and

                           hunched-over backs,

                      neatly-pressed clothes that

                       give witness to this crime.

                                                                     A pristine macabre;

                                                                                    The death of an Artist.
©2006-2009 ~ADreamReflected
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I though of this today when my friend {an artist, like most ... wait ... all of my friends} said to me, "My worst fear is working in a box." And I answered, "It's the death of creativity."

I'm sure any artist can relate to that. Thus, this poem sprang into my head.

It's really about what happens to inspiration when creative people are thrust into environments that conditions them to conform. To others, it may look like nothing: but to us, it's a grisly murder.

I had the hardest time figuring out what catagory it would go in. =/ I hope it's right.

I may revise this poem later on, but probably not. I'm pretty satisfied with it.

I hope you guys enjoy it too; and if you look, PLEASE comment. I'm proud of it, and I'd like to know what you think.
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By Kat, GoH! That was amazing!

=DDD

How do you poets know when to indent like that? xD Always confused me. xD

Amazing poem, GoHzie! *Guards last 2 lines*
Thankies, Kat. =3

And I indented the lines randomly. That's why it's a free-form poem. Though the line breaks are for emphasis.

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The world behind a camera lens.

"For nowadays the world is lit by lightning ... blow out your candles, and good night."
Whoo! I really like this one...yes, I've often had fears of situations just like that...*shudders*

Duh man will never hold me down! Muwahaha!

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"You continue my continuations..."
i would never be able to work in a box....proof? i can't sit still in my desk in chemistry class. very well written poem amme...
Lordosis, I swear, I'd die if I had an office-job. How do they stand it? You'd think I respect them, but I can only mourn the loss of their dignity for them. Alas.

Obscure feelings about today, so this post is a little weird. But I really like this poem. And that's quite the thing - I hate poetry. >.< Sorta. :/ I guess.
that sounds like when i have to take a mid term. 3 hrs of no moving and no talking

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If you love something, set it free. If it comes back to you, it's yours. If it doesn't, it never was."
-Unknown
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